1. i think the film narratively it worked really well, and i loved the shots where his friends disappeared. also the acting was really good which added to the narrative
2. considering it was meant to be a drama, maybe try and not to be so funny, and try and go deeper in to alex's background, (maybe a flashback) then it might of had more of an impact.
3. i think that the target audience is both male and female of ages between 16-25
5. i think your film would be found on the internet, film festivals
1 - It was all bloody good! The editing and continuity is all perfect, and the storyline is excellent. Generally the acting is good, especially from Alex.
2 - I'm not keen on the black screen and the title "Some things aren't meant to be seen" or whatever it said. It's kind of unnecessary and it wouldn't take anything away from the film by removing it.
3 - Teenagers definitely, and adults too but not to the same degree. You do meet that demographic.
4 - Internet, Virgin Media Shorts (y'know the short films played before the trailers at the Picturehouses?)
1. I thought that the use if cinematography was especially good, also the use of varied camera techniques was a very effective way f portraying the narrative. 2. I would change the pace of the film to make it slower, but that is just something I would do. 3.I think the target audience is teenagers that are fans of shows such as The Inbetweeners, I think that the film achieves this. 4. short film festivals, Youtube etc.
1. i think the film narratively it worked really well, and i loved the shots where his friends disappeared. also the acting was really good which added to the narrative
ReplyDelete2. considering it was meant to be a drama, maybe try and not to be so funny, and try and go deeper in to alex's background, (maybe a flashback) then it might of had more of an impact.
3. i think that the target audience is both male and female of ages between 16-25
5. i think your film would be found on the internet, film festivals
1 - It was all bloody good! The editing and continuity is all perfect, and the storyline is excellent. Generally the acting is good, especially from Alex.
ReplyDelete2 - I'm not keen on the black screen and the title "Some things aren't meant to be seen" or whatever it said. It's kind of unnecessary and it wouldn't take anything away from the film by removing it.
3 - Teenagers definitely, and adults too but not to the same degree. You do meet that demographic.
4 - Internet, Virgin Media Shorts (y'know the short films played before the trailers at the Picturehouses?)
that was soooooo gooooooddddd!!!
ReplyDelete1. The clean cut editing really put it all together :)
2.The cafe scene when we are introduced to the girls was a bit slow, i wasn't too sure the shot reverse shot worked.
3. young adults, i think that the smooth switch into drama after the comedy bits would be appreciated by that audience.
4. youtubbbeeee
1. I thought that the use if cinematography was especially good, also the use of varied camera techniques was a very effective way f portraying the narrative.
ReplyDelete2. I would change the pace of the film to make it slower, but that is just something I would do.
3.I think the target audience is teenagers that are fans of shows such as The Inbetweeners, I think that the film achieves this.
4. short film festivals, Youtube etc.